qiqilt

本人英文太菜了.请帮忙看看.万分感谢啊!还有地方需要修饰吗?



正如我们所知道的。广告在人们的生活中起了越来越重要的作用.
As we all know,The advertisement has the more and more important function in the people's life.
广告对我们有两种相反的影响
The advertisement has two opposite effects on us.
一方面这对我们是好的。因为通过广告而了解的产品知识可以帮我们选择什么是我们要买的。
On the one hand, it’s good for us.because the information about prodncts help us to select what we wish to buy.
人们为他们的朋友购买礼物，这将刺激消费，并且因此促进我们经济的发展。
people tend to buy gifts for their friends, which will stimulate consumption, and as a result promote the development of our economy.
在另一方面，厂商和电视台只是想获得更多的利益
But on the other hand, Manufacturers and TV station want to get more benefit。
对他们来说，他们并不关心产品的质量和顾客的利益。只有钱。
To them,the quality of the product and the benefits of the customer is not important,but the money.
如果产品卖不好,就通过广告的形式来提高销量
If the product sell not good,pass the advertised form to raise which can't sell well.

qiqilt

都没有人回帖吗.?还是我太心急了!

deslidell

这个翻译太糟糕了。

TeresaWang

正如我们所知道的。广告在人们的生活中起了越来越重要的作用.
As we all know, The advertisement is playing a more and more important role in people's life.

广告对我们有两种相反的影响
The advertisement has two contrast effects on us.

一方面这对我们是好的。因为通过广告而了解的产品知识可以帮我们选择什么是我们要买的。
On one hand, it can enrich our knowledge towards the products, assisting us on how to choose commodities.
人们为他们的朋友购买礼物，这将刺激消费，并且因此促进我们经济的发展。
People purchase gifts for their friends, such behavior can stimulate consumption and accelerate the improvement of national economy.
在另一方面，厂商和电视台只是想获得更多的利益
On the other, factories and TV stations are intended to earn benefits from such commercial activity 。
对他们来说，他们并不关心产品的质量和顾客的利益。只有钱。
As for them, what they care most is profit rather than the quality as well as the benefits of customers.

如果产品卖不好,就通过广告的形式来提高销量
If the sale volume for a product is no good, they normally raise the sale volume by means of ads.